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Fine Art. . . by =Neko-Fayth:iconNeko-Fayth:

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Submitted: May 2, 2008
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Is one of the many things I can't do. =____=;;;;

I dunno, just trying to get back into it after, what, 3 years now I think?Yeah basically. Almost 4 since it was Junior High I took actual drawing classes. >>;

To be honest I don't know why I even did it. >>; When I was first starting out is was an anime picture for *Mishuku but then I just kept erasing crap and started to change the face to look more realistic. Wish I had at least had a reference so it'd look more like an actual person. l/

LOL Synnie proud I stepped out side my box?

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`touchedvenus:icontouchedvenus: May 2, 2008, 2:29:39 PM
I think she looks very lovely. :)

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~SamRH:iconSamRH: May 2, 2008, 2:32:45 PM
I think it looks great. X3

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=Neko-Fayth:iconNeko-Fayth: May 2, 2008, 2:34:26 PM
LOL You'd know Sam. XDDD

Is there anything though still you could point out that I need to be wary of next time? D:

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=Neko-Fayth:iconNeko-Fayth: May 2, 2008, 2:34:34 PM
Thank you : 3

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~JWenm:iconJWenm: May 2, 2008, 2:56:08 PM
It looks really nice though. :] One thing I'd like to suggest though - is to soften the shading of the hair.

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=TaciturnSeraph:iconTaciturnSeraph: May 2, 2008, 3:06:49 PM
Haha, it *almost* looks like me. I absolutely HAD to try it out. XD Tah-dawww: [link]

I think your drawing looks very nice; The shoulder should probably be back a little farther, I think... I don't usually go past the neck when drawing in profile just because I find that one bit to be difficult. Very pretty picture. <3

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~tom-bob-russ:icontom-bob-russ: May 2, 2008, 3:19:26 PM
it all looks very good. something about the neck and/or shoulders seems only a little off. I'm not sure what because I have this same problem. i myself am trying to work on different poses and the neck is a pain (in the "neck" per say?) for me.

but, ya, looks really good.

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~Strawberryish-Ryoko:iconStrawberryish-Ryoko: May 2, 2008, 3:41:51 PM
I really like this~The only critique that I could give is the postition of her ear,it looks a bit off but I suppose That's just the angle^^

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~PoisonFurret:iconPoisonFurret: May 2, 2008, 3:51:35 PM
le gasp realism xD
I dunno, you captured many realistic features very well Fayth :D,
primarily the neck line and face structure on the left side work very well with the stressed pose you gave her. one thing I notice though is that her eye appears nice and full, it looks kinda lifeless by how she's positioned which takes away a little from the realism a bit as if she was a doll. dunno just me :/
but all in all for something u haven't done for a few years, you did very well :D hell even better than my realism and I been doing art classes all highschool lol xD

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~SamRH:iconSamRH: May 2, 2008, 3:57:28 PM
Ummm.. I dunno. Everything looks good. XD

You know I'm bad at critiqing. I think it looks wonderful~ ;3

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